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Friday, 2 November 2018
Inquiry
For Inquiry we had to do a place that we connect with.I did Tolaga bay in Gisborne.
Hi Clare I love your drawing of Tolaga Bay It's so colorful and I love the miniature warf. My feedback for you would be that you need to work on your spelling. But it is very creative.
thank you all for your comments yes i know i need to work on my spelling and i'm getting better.sorry you can't read why maybe you could zoom in or some thing thanks again for all your nice words from clare
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Hi Clare I love your drawing of Tolaga Bay It's so colorful and I love the miniature warf. My feedback for you would be that you need to work on your spelling. But it is very creative.
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Great job,I liked your detail and effort in your toliga bay sketch and all of your things
ReplyDeleteBula Clare, I was wondering how you connect with Tolaga Bay.
ReplyDeleteI love your drawing of the wharf
Ok moe-thay.
thank you all for your comments yes i know i need to work on my spelling and i'm getting better.sorry you can't read why maybe you could zoom in or some thing thanks again for all your nice words
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